Of To War.
It all stared when everyone was having the most greatest time of there lives! Then there was a man who came and dropped something by the house OK I'll go see what the letter as about. (mom is walking out) Mom is walking back in the house gasping what mom what you have to go to the WAR in three days! No mom no i don't want to go well it says here that you have to go in tree days. Well I know what we can do in those three days we can have fun and see the family and tell then what is going to happening. OK well we will start by going to the Big mountains the we will go see the family! OK OK well I ant to see the family first. OK well that's were we are headed. Finally we made it to Granada's house we knocked and knocked on the door Grandma are you there finally she came and said what are y'all doing here this late at night mother we have to tell you something are little teenager is going in WAR! No No we will miss him I know I know but he needs to be apart of some stuff right, OK thank you, for telling me that I'll come by some time and see y'all.
Kailey, your blog is very hard to follow with the dialogue you are using. You need to use quotations to separate the conversation along with stating who said what. The reader will become very frustrated if the flow of your blog is not correctly put together by ensuring your punctuation is used properly. 75%
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